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主角???? 2008-10-27 22:01:26
大大你怎么没把文中的主角名标出来啊???已默我知道了,但应该还有一个吧,里面有提到皇宫,不会是宫廷里的吧````````````````应该是一对一的吧???? 查看全文>>
慢啊 2009-02-03 21:39:50
真的是何必内慢啊``````````````````` 不过幸好楼主没有弃坑```````````` 查看全文>>
我又活过来了 2009-01-10 21:46:09
泪奔啊,我又活过来了,看楼主那么久没更新,以为弃坑了,没想到今天竟看到更新了,说实话,楼主这篇文真的不错,所以不要弃坑哦````````````````楼主加油更新哦`````````````````` 查看全文>>
终于更新了 2008-12-10 22:49:48
楼主你终于更新了,等了好久哦,我还以为你弃坑了``````````````````` 千山宵暮好细心哦,连月白对蜂蜜过敏都知道,希望大大不要虐他们俩,要虐就虐那些该虐的,让父子俩甜甜蜜蜜的``````````````` 查看全文>>
虽然大大有几天没更新了``````````````````````````但我还是会给票滴````````````````希望大大快快更新哦````````````````````那个问下哦,这应该不是虐文吧???????? 查看全文>>
“遇见了你,寂寞好像少了很多。”千山宵暮神色坦然,揽过冷月白稍显冰凉的身子:“已经很晚了,我就留在这儿睡一晚吧。” 少年低下头,任他脱去外衫,裹进锦被之中。两人相拥而眠,唯有暗淡的烛光,照见室中的阴影。 千山宵暮,遇见你,我的寂寞也少了很多。 -------------------------------------------------------- 哈哈哈``````````````````俩个人终于有点不一样了 有进展```````````````` 什么都不多说,还是砸票票给大大``````````````` 查看全文>>
好戏上演 2008-10-31 21:44:44
不得不说皇帝老爹还真是只老狐狸``````````````````让月白处在水深火热中,呵呵``````` 似乎宫廷战要开始了``````````````````好戏要上演了`````````````````砸票砸票````````````` 查看全文>>
这章看的我飘飘然 2008-10-30 18:49:57
这章看的我飘飘然,月白胆子好大哦,就这样跟他老爹挑白了```````````````呵呵````````有趣,有趣````````````期待下文`````````````` 查看全文>>
穿越古装父子文是我的最爱```````````````````虽然精彩部分还没开始,但我有预感接下去肯定会很精彩````````````````还有大大你应该在文章的标题旁标注(父子)这两字,这样我相信看的人肯定很多,你没标就没人知道是父子文了,期待下文``````` 查看全文>>
好看好看 2008-10-20 21:57:58
楼住你的文很不错哦 我很喜欢父子文(年上) 我会继续关注的 不知道你的更新时间是怎么安排的????? 查看全文>>
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