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Off track...
2014-10-20 07:04:17 发表
Can I just say that this story is getting more and more off track as it progresses... Not that it“s bad or anything， but this feels like more than one story now. The author could have developed some of the characters into their own stories to do them justice. Now， this just feels like a big mish-mesh...too bad...
Can I just say that this story is getting more and more off track as it progresses... Not that it“s bad or anything， but this feels like more than one story now. The author could have developed some of the characters into their own stories to do them justice. Now， this just feels like a big mish-mesh...too bad...共有1篇帖子