天啊～～～～～～终于明白了～～～～～～不过父亲大人藏得好深啊～～～居然策划了那么久～～～～～～无语了～～～～～但是以后小舞一定会幸福的～～～～大大加油～～～～
作者回复：嘻嘻～～～湮裟大大好啊。感谢大大的评论，这是祈的第一部小说难免会有些失误，以后祈一定会努力改进，希望大大以后多往祈这里来串门，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
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文笔很稚嫩，有点流水帐一样流过的感觉，人物性格描写不太精细且过于夸张。看了几章就看不下去了。多多修炼吧。
作者回复：dobby大大好啊！嘻嘻祈将那个龙翔天的番外补上了哦！
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大大啊~~~~~~~~~一直都提到的那个帝行天到底怎么回事啊~~~~~~~~~~他和在舞的爹爹有什么关系吗~~~~~~~~~一直不太明白的说~~~~~~~~会出番外解释下吗~~~~~~
小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
作者回复：odileyaya好啊！最近都没什么时间写东西，很累啊！但还好没什么工作！
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小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
作者回复：odileyaya大大好啊！嘻嘻～～～最近很忙都没什么时间看大大的评了！非常感谢大大的支持！要不大大就加上祈的ＱＱ吧！！！５１０１８９９５１
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小菲，偶来砸票了！！！！！(*^__^*)嘻嘻……砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~砸票~~~~~~~~~~
