写得不错呢~我觉得人物性格处理的有些奇怪呢？故事情节的安排可以更细致一点，期待你可以写更多字数的文~加油思密达~^_^~ 查看全文>>

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很细腻的文笔，短短的话语就可以表达出很多东西，不过这种文有人喜欢有人不喜欢吧...不过我还行^_^加油~ 查看全文>>